Sunday, March 4, 2012

Revision #4- Open Prompt #6

1976. The conflict created when the will of an individual opposes the will of the majority is the recurring theme of many novels, plays, and essays. Select the work of an essayist who is in opposition to his or her society; or from a work of recognized literary merit, select a fictional character who is in opposition to his or her society. In a critical essay, analyze the conflict and discuss the moral and ethical implications for both the individual and the society. Do not summarize the plot or action of the work you choose.
 

It’s never easy to stand up to the crowd, but it can be even more difficult when the crowd consists of neighbors, friends and families. In Ceremony, by Leslie Marmon Silko, this is the struggle of the protagonist Tayo as he attempt to reconcile with his dark past. Unable to find peace with himself using traditional Laguna methods or American ones, he consults a radical medicine man who shows him the problems  with the  Pueblo’s traditional ways as they do not take into account changes in the new world. Ceremony illustrates that the strength and power of rituals derives from their ability to adapt in an ever-changing world-- a direct contrast to the views of Tayo’s society.

 Due to his mixed ancestry and his characteristic “hazel eyes”, Tayo serves as a continuous reminder of the white influence. To the Laguna Pueblos, two contradictory sentiments dominate regarding the white-American culture: a desire to either gain approval from the culture,  or to scorn it.. Through his army stories, the character Emo reveals this ambivalence. He speaks highly of the days when white women swarmed around him, showing a desire to be embraced by the white American society. However, Emo is also the first to bring up Tayo’s mixed ancestry and to attack Tayo for his heritage. He cries out “There he is. He thinks he’s something all right. Because he’s part white. Don’t you, half-breed?” This illustrates Emo’s feeling of resentment caused by the white culture that directly contrasts with his longing to be immersed in it.


Although Tayo notices the ambivalence in the Pueblos’ view of the white culture early on, he is unable to find a solution. While Tayo’s army buddies turn to liquor, “the medicine for the anger that made them hurt”, Tayo searches for another way to make peace with himself. When Tayo visits Betonie, Betonie reveals that the Pueblo customs of old have become obsolete because they fail to take into account the presence of whites. By manipulating the old rituals, Betonie actually fortifies the Pueblo traditions  because they become applicable to the present. Through this, Betonie helps Tayo achieve peace and break free from the anger and ambivalence. Betonie and the new rituals help Tayo renew a sense of pride in his culture- something that had been  lost by many of Tayo’s people.


Ceremony suggests that traditions and rituals rest at the crux of cultures. When the traditions become obsolete, society loses a sense of pride and unity. By tweaking rituals to suit the modern world however, a culture’s strength can be restored. Although Tayo is the only one to realize this key detail, his transformation implies the potential for the entire Pueblo community to be revitalized.

3 comments:

  1. You should explain why Tayo's hazel eyes make him a mixture (blue water + yellow pollen i think). You could also link Betonie in paragraph 3 to his description in paragraph 1 to make it easier to follow, or mention his name in the first paragraph.

    Overall, I like your structure and your plain style is better.

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  2. I personally do not see a whole lot of connection between what you were saying about Tayo and Betonie, and the part about Emo's contradicting feelings about culture. I do see the where the connection could be, but I feel you could somehow make it more clear to the reader, maybe adding a sentence or two onto the first body paragraph. Great plain style.

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